Better late than never.

Unless by being late all you're getting is an earful of abuse and bad criticism, in which case you should have probably just stayed in bed.

Luckily enough for me, that's not the case, and I got some goodish feedback on my Poster.
I should have got three bits of feedback, and arrived back with three bits. I thought i'd get four, but that's cool I guess, at least I know what does and doesn't work[ish].

And if you're too lazy to scroll down to find the Poster, well then I don't blame you. I know how you feel, it's effort, right? Well here it is again, because I'm a considerate person.



1) 'SIMBA!!!!!<3!
GROMIT!!!!<3!
Is SIMBA!! the Girl and GROMIT!! the Guy?
The Title should not be all over their Face and the Font is a little too plain.
Is this the Poster? It's not too clear what it is- also, do you need to take a Phone of me for it? :/
ILY BABE.

2) 'The Font is a bit plain. Is this meant to be a Poster?
What is the Relationship between the Picture and the Song?'

3) 'I get the Everywhere like bit with Photoshopped Gromit. Is there suppost to be Plumbing in the background?'

To the First piece of feedback- I'm glad you like it, and understand the concept. I know I need to change around the cliches that make it a Poster, and will on the final piece.

To the Second piece of feedback- I am aware the Font is plain. My computer was on the point of breaking with all the layers going on, and it was the best I could do. Yes, it is meant to be a Poster, and I can see why someone would wonder what this is. I'm not surprised with this, and will fix it.
The relationship between the Picture and the Song is the concept of 'Everywhere'. The idea is the performer is standing in front of the same Poster that the reader will be standing in front of, and in her picture is the man in the Video. So the Poster links more to the Video than the Song, but I feel it works as a Campaign.

To the Third piece of feedback- I'm glad you understand the concept of the Poster, I do feel though that I need to find a way to make it more clear though. As for the Plumbing, it's actually a towel rack. I took the picture in my Bathroom at night, and it was the best I could do, unfortunately.

So it's clear I need to make improvements. To start, I want to take a picture of our performer in a street, with a green screen Poster next to her, to make it more appropriate to the context of the Poster. Also at this time a picture will be taken of the man on our video in the same location, from the same angle. I need to make it clear that it's a poster, so I will add album reviews, better text, and a release date to the image. Also I will place the text in a better position, that's more appropriate to being a Poster.

I'll come up with a rough draft drawing of it soon enough.