Saturday, 20 March 2010

I'm aware this is slightly late, but it did take FOREVER to render and upload.

So, i've altered the time that this post is uploaded. As far as Blogger is concerned, it was uploaded yesterday at 3:34 pm. I know that you know it wasn't, but you can't really punish me for it. It's 90 minutes late for christs' sake. It's not like we're doing Research for a project a week after we've finished the whole thing, and then altering the date to make it look like we did it earlier.

Wait...




So yeah, knock off marks, and you're a massive hypocrite.

And then I'll blackmail you.

Evaluation- Elliott from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

You said make the Evaluation tasks as intresting as possible, here's my attempt.

If I was making it as intresting as possible, I'd have written a song and sung it into a megaphone from the top of the Regal pub, but this is good enough.

Friday, 19 March 2010

Thursday, 18 March 2010

a couple more bits i need to work on later




Mutiny- Set Your Goals

This video has a pirate theme,
which links to the name
of the song, 'Mutiny'

We Don't Care Anymore- Story of the Year

The band is jumping, high energy, lights
all around, a record company would want
the band to be seen like this to promote
the energy of the music

Dimmu Borgir- The Sacrilegious Scorn

This shot shows a Black Metal performer
in front of a burning cross. This is very
genre specific as it is identified with the
style of music

10 Miles Wide- Escape the Fate

This video is set on an aeroplane,
and the reference seen here is to the film
'Snakes on a Plane', with a quote
spoken from the film.

Guys like you make us look bad- Blessthefall

The Camera is placed looking through a hole
focused on the lead performer, set up tight
on his head.

Echoes- Set Your Goals

The lighting at the end of the
Video is set up so it pours
though the walls and into the
room. A smoke machine
would have been used to add
to the effect.

Fireflies- Owl City

In this video all the toys in this
room begin to start turning on and
moving around. This is heavy on
Mis-en-scene as the bulk of the
video is dependant on it being effective.

The Anthem- Good Charlotte

This has a band performance at
night, with lighting close to what
was used in 'Everywhere'. The idea
of a band performance is very
cliche and used commonly.

The Thespian- Alesana

Close up of the performer being active
with a Microphone. Guitar is not seen,
but present in shot. Black and White
is used to give it an older feel, and
lighting is effective shining onto camera.

Wednesday, 17 March 2010

Nine Frames (Question One)

Here is the first half of Question One.


1. This shot shows a link because of the reference to the idea of 'Everywhere', established in the song.

2. This shot shows a lead female performer, taking up lots of the frame with the attention on her, as a record company would want

3. This shot shows a band performance in full swing, very common in Music Videos that are 'Pop-Rock'

4. The way this scene is shot is a reference to the film '500 Days of Summer', in which a large blackboard drawing is shot in the same style.

5. This shot shows the Camera on an angle that continues to move, which I feel works very well with increasing the pace of the shot

6. This shot shows one of the Lighting setups we used. We used two large lights to make the stage seem more theatrical.

7. In this shot you see the Paint and Paintbrush we used to create the 'I'm not alone'
canvas drawing.We added extra Paint splatters on the ground for effect.

8. Close up of Instrument playing- a very commonsight in modern Music Videos

9. Using Bluescreen and other effects to create a whole new image- a common sight in modern Music Videos.

Friday, 12 March 2010

Good News- If you've gotten this far, you're probably not Epileptic

And you'll need to bear that good news in life, as my music video has more flashes than the rough cut.
This blog post is sent to you direct from a gig, one of my favorite bands, A day to remember.
I had no time to blog earlier, with a train to catch and all, but while I wait, sitting on the floor where the mosh pit will inevitably be, I can let you all know that my music video is finally complete, and I'll embed it when I'm next at a computer.
Editing today went really well. Just after lunch nick reviewed it, and suggested some changes. Some of which I changed, some of which I acted upon, some I didn't.
It looks like the first band is coming on, and I don't want to be sitting where the pit will be, so the rest will be briefer than a marriage with Jenifer Aniston.

Edited like crazy
Made some big improvements
Steve saw it at the end of the day for the first time
He thought it was great
It's now on vimeo
All is good.



ELLIOTT - 'EVERYWHERE' FINAL VIDEO from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

Thursday, 11 March 2010

catch up on what's been going on

no wordplay, witty or dry humour here. i'm too tired for that and i have to make the most of the internet I have, stolen from a house somewhere around here.

it's been a while since i did the blog thing, again, so i've a lot to catch up on. a week ago today is where i'll begin.

last thursday we took our final shots for the music video. we got a bluescreen, flattened it out and stapled it on a wall, and shot angelica in front of it. sven shot her singing for her ending, but i don't think he's going to use that. it went well i think, the bluescreen was really flat and angelica wasn't wearing anything blue, so i think it should be easy to create the effect.

the rough cut deadline was for the next day, so i uploaded all the footage straight away and began cutting. it was a productive day, with plenty of lip-syncing and cutting, and i made good progress with it. you can find the rough cut of my music video below this paragraph.

ELLIOT - 'EVERYWHERE' ROUGH CUT from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

monday was our chance to get ourselves a load of feedback off the class. it was nice to see what others thought about it, and shone a new light on how i should look at the video.

the main problem with the video it seems is i need more cutaways. i shot more than i used, so it shouldn't be a problem to do this. other things that came up were fix a bit of lip-syncing and the drummer isn't very good. i'm working on the lip-syncing and i'm trying to make the drummer look as good as i can with fast cutting.

people liked the video, though, and the main point that kept coming up is the lighting. seeing as i dragged down extra lights through coleridge, i'm happy people liked them. people liked the shots in the video and the general pace, and i'm glad that the way the video is heading is being will recieved.

tuesday was back to the edit, and i made more progress on my music video. that's pretty much all there is to say about it. i didn't finish it, i made good progress, and fixed a couple of bits i didn't have time to do on friday. i also took a few frames from my video for work on my digipak, which i worked on that night.

at home on tuesday i took the screenshots i had and began work on my digipak. i decided that the general idea of the digipak should be the painting/canvas bit in the music video, as the link works well and i got some lovely stills of all the paint and painting. i cropped and edited and decided what image should go where, and by the end of the evening i had a rough digipak ready to go. i had no text, as i wanted to download some, but with no internet that wasn't happening anytime soon, but structure was a big plus. the rough digipak can be seen below this paragraph.

wednesday was on the edit, again, and this time i came close to finishing my video. i got feedback from nick on how i could improve it so far, and how it looks in it's current form. i got real close to finishing the timeline on wednesday, so friday will be finishing the timeline, then just generally fixing all the issues with it in it's current form (shots held too long, etc) i also gathered a lot more frames from the video for the digipak, so i could finish it that night, as i wanted to make a physical one.

after college i went to long road to use the internet, and got loads of fonts, album infomation, and other bits and pieces i'd need for my digipak. in town i bought card, photo paper, and paint for my digipak. i wanted to do a whole booklet for it, and decided instead of just using stills from the video in it, i should do my own artwork to make it more unique. out in my garden there's this... thing over the other side of the pond made of brick, and i splattered the wall with paint, and strung a microphone by it's wire off a light fixture. i let paint drip down the wire and over the microphone, and took pictures as it happened.
i also got paint on drumsticks, as we don't get our drum kit moved into our new house until tomorrow, and also dribbled paint on an acoustic guitar, and took pictures for the artwork. i made a massive mess all over the walls, i need a pressure washer to get rid of it.
i spent literally all night on it, finalising my digipak and doing a 16 sided booklet for it, it was effort, but at 7am i had a physical digipak and a copy of the booklet on memory stick, ready for college.

in college (we're on thursday now, or today, however you want to look at it. that's why i'm so tired, by the way. it's the fact that i can only get internet at 11pm from some house nearby and i only got two hours of sleep last night/morning) i did my poster. i'm not entirely happy with it, but i feel it's a good job in a short amount of time. i'm sure my digipak will go over much better than the poster.
but oh well, even though it may not get me so many marks, i'm proud to call it mine.

Digipak/Poster Final

Okay although I handed in a physical Digipak, here's it in it's digital form

FRONT COVER



BACK COVER



CD FLAP WHATEVER YOU WANT TO CALL IT



INSIDE LEFT



INSIDE MIDDLE



BEHIND CD IMAGE














DIGIPAK BOOKLET


I should probably mention here that the images in the background are either single frames from the music video, or pictures that I took myself.
Those with Orange dripping paint I took myself the night before, out in my garden. i feel they go along with the paint theme of the digipak, and wanted to have pictures in the booklet taken by myself, that reflected and expanded on the same style as my digipak.


FRONT PAGE



PAGE ONE



PAGE TWO



PAGE THREE



PAGE FOUR



PAGE FIVE



PAGE SIX



PAGE SEVEN AND EIGHT (DOUBLE PICTURE IN THE BOOKLET, MIDDLE PAGE)



PAGE NINE



PAGE TEN



PAGE ELEVEN



PAGE TWELVE



PAGE THIRTEEN



PAGE FOURTEEN



BACK PAGE




POSTER FOR 'THE SPIRIT ROOM'

Wednesday, 10 March 2010

Digipak artwork

My digipak is coming along nicely, I should think. Last night I spent a few hours choosing what pictures I should use, and editing them for the digipak as a whole. I currently have a template with a rough digipak on, but nothing concrete. My hope is to finish the digipak tonight, and mabye the poster, and blog loads in lesson tomorrow, seeing as I'm really behind and email is the only form of blogging I can do, apart from being in long road in general. In fact, I planned to blog at long road today, shame that didn't turn out with me actually blogging.
I wanted to blog, I came into long road when I had no lessons and got to work, but instead I was held down by digipak work. I was getting tons of fonts, album infomation, lyrics, reviews, all that stuff. I'd consider that a legit excuse.
I may or may not have mentioned, but I've decided to do a physical digipak, as well as the template.
After college I decided to get extra materials I'd need for my digipak. Hunting through poundland I found photo paper, CD cases, and a box of mansize tissues which I can take apart and use as card for my digipak.
Buying all that made me miss my bus, which is once an hour, so that was annoying, but as I was aimlessly wondering through HMV I was thinking about the artwork in my digipak. I had plenty of stills from my video, and a couple of photos taken from shooting, but nothing taken just for the digipak.
I decided to continue the paint theme I currently had in my digipak, and I bought some more paint from early learning centre. With this I plan to get drumsticks/a couple of drum pieces, a guitar pick/acoustic guitar and a microphone, and have paint dripping off them. I think that'll look cool, and it fits with the current theme.

Tuesday, 9 March 2010

Digipak progress

I've been working on my Digipak for a couple of hours now, and I'm really happy with how it's going

Sending this from my iPhone, so I'll fill in the gaps at a later date, just sending this to keep up to date, barely.

Friday, 5 March 2010

Late start to the Edit

But everyones gotta start somewhere.

Sven and I took the very final shots for our Video yesterday. It was a small scene, which required a Bluescreen. It turned out well, we stapled it to a big Board, and from then on we were ready for the Edit

We'd already captured most our stuff, so we only captured the Park and Bluescreen footage, and then began to watch our stuff.

Sven and I have decided to Edit separately, on two machines, so we transferred all the HD footage from my Mac to Sven's, via a HDD. This'll work out well for the both of us, I'm sure.

Thursday, 4 March 2010

Better late than never.

Unless by being late all you're getting is an earful of abuse and bad criticism, in which case you should have probably just stayed in bed.

Luckily enough for me, that's not the case, and I got some goodish feedback on my Poster.
I should have got three bits of feedback, and arrived back with three bits. I thought i'd get four, but that's cool I guess, at least I know what does and doesn't work[ish].

And if you're too lazy to scroll down to find the Poster, well then I don't blame you. I know how you feel, it's effort, right? Well here it is again, because I'm a considerate person.



1) 'SIMBA!!!!!<3!
GROMIT!!!!<3!
Is SIMBA!! the Girl and GROMIT!! the Guy?
The Title should not be all over their Face and the Font is a little too plain.
Is this the Poster? It's not too clear what it is- also, do you need to take a Phone of me for it? :/
ILY BABE.

2) 'The Font is a bit plain. Is this meant to be a Poster?
What is the Relationship between the Picture and the Song?'

3) 'I get the Everywhere like bit with Photoshopped Gromit. Is there suppost to be Plumbing in the background?'

To the First piece of feedback- I'm glad you like it, and understand the concept. I know I need to change around the cliches that make it a Poster, and will on the final piece.

To the Second piece of feedback- I am aware the Font is plain. My computer was on the point of breaking with all the layers going on, and it was the best I could do. Yes, it is meant to be a Poster, and I can see why someone would wonder what this is. I'm not surprised with this, and will fix it.
The relationship between the Picture and the Song is the concept of 'Everywhere'. The idea is the performer is standing in front of the same Poster that the reader will be standing in front of, and in her picture is the man in the Video. So the Poster links more to the Video than the Song, but I feel it works as a Campaign.

To the Third piece of feedback- I'm glad you understand the concept of the Poster, I do feel though that I need to find a way to make it more clear though. As for the Plumbing, it's actually a towel rack. I took the picture in my Bathroom at night, and it was the best I could do, unfortunately.

So it's clear I need to make improvements. To start, I want to take a picture of our performer in a street, with a green screen Poster next to her, to make it more appropriate to the context of the Poster. Also at this time a picture will be taken of the man on our video in the same location, from the same angle. I need to make it clear that it's a poster, so I will add album reviews, better text, and a release date to the image. Also I will place the text in a better position, that's more appropriate to being a Poster.

I'll come up with a rough draft drawing of it soon enough.

Tuesday, 2 March 2010

This is a big one, I don't know if I can do all of it in one go. (And cue Liam)

I can't seem to remember where I left off last time I made a proper blog post, but I'd assume that it's the beginning of our filming week.

First day back from half term, and I was late. You get used to sleeping at 4am and waking at 1, it's not a simple task to be into college at 10:50. I was greeted by a graph written on the board, with each groups filming plans written on it. Everyone had plans filled in throughout the week, and all was looking grand. And if it wasn't for our group having one massive gap throughout the whole week, it'd be one hell of an impressive show. Sven and I discussed how we wanted to shoot things further, and the digipak ideas we had during the half term. It wasn't an intresting day, and if I were to have the days events in a single blog post, you'd be left feeling disapointted.

Tuesday comes along, and it's our first day back at Coleridge. I can't remember what we did, I'm sure it's on Svens blog somewhere. Remember, I'm doing this via email on my phone, I can't just check around on other stuff. I'd like to say I'll edit this, but I make no promises.

Stuck in a hotel for tonight and last night, you know it's a slow time when sky news is the most intresting thing thing to watch. It's crazy, I don't think I'll ever understand the format. It's pretty unique, and could only be topped if the team behind MTV Cribs teamed up with H.M. Prisons. 
It's easy to imagine the production offices being crazy 24/7, with the mission statement 'Find It, Shoot It, Pimp It, Shout It'. I feel I could do a better job with the mission statement, but I'm too lazy to think it out any more than that.
But seriously, why do people watch this rubbish? It's like asking for a book, and being given the diary of Anne frank with pop-out illustrations by a comic book artist. I want to know the news, I don't want to see images of people trapped under rubble, yelling for their lives with flashy graphics over the top, some smug guy on location watching everyone with a moral compass help out while also pointing out that I can give my views by going on the website. It's heartbreaking, depressing stuff packaged for the MTV generation, and I'll never get it. 

Wednesday came around, and Sven and I had hoped to get some pickup shots for our video. Close-ups of objects, nothing out the ordinary for a music video, but it'd seem we didn't get the memo on no filming on Wednesday. Seeing as it was a media lesson, I don't think I need to write about the lesson on this blog. But then again, I write paragraphs on stuff that'll never get me marks, so I can't really talk.
The more significant thing about Wednesday was helping out with Tinas group, and her music video for 'Shadows', which was eventful to say the least. A few months ago I saw 'Where the Wild Things are', and fell in love with it. So much that after just one viewing, I decided to make my own wolf suit, like that of the main character, Max. 
As it turns out, Tinas video for 'Shadows' had an Alice in wonderland feel to it, and my wolf suit would look great in it as a White rabbit feel. The setup was long, the place looked great, and then it started raining. 3 takes of performance were done, and we were unable to film anything else, meaning me being there was unrecorded in the video, but I'd like to think I was good in the helping out setup stage. Also, I got mud on my tail. That's very, very annoying.

Thursday was next, as you'd expect from your standard seven day week we've become so used to, and I was late. The realisation of the little time we had left to shoot hit us hard, and we decoded to make plans to shoot the bulk of the video the following day. We knew we'd need extra materials for the location where our performer would be in front of a canvas with 'i'm not alone' behind her, and went to the art department to ask about where we could get one. It was also on this day we discovered that chloe would not be able to perform due to other media commitments, so we knew we needed to find someone new. As it turns out, canvas is really expensive, and we needed to choose something else. I decided that a bedsheet would work best, and online found one from tesco that I could afford. I also searched for paint and paintbrush, which I found at the early learning centre quite cheaply. Also, on Thursday, we re-wrote our treatment to remove the house and street location, because it was too complex with what time we had left. I think it was a good decision, and we made good compromises with the treatment. After college, I went to the early learning centre, and bought the paint and paintbrush, and looked in poundland for something we might be able to use. I found a large roll of paper, and superglue which I thought would work very well instead of a bedsheet, and so I bought those.
Thursday night was a panic. We had everything set for Friday, apart from performers. I managed to get my friend, Glenn, to do the drums in our band performance, but that was all I could manage, as it was being shot at Coleridge. Sven managed to get liam to bring in a acoustic guitar, and that night I prayed that the following day would turn out okay. Well, I didn't pray, but I lost a little sleep over it.

Colgate seems to have stolen sensodyne's idea. I wish I could google sensodyne, I'm not sure if I typed it right, but oh well. 
The idea is to make the adverts seem as if they're a documentary on what's going on, but it's clear as day that it's all been planned to look that way. Ever notice how generic they are in sensodyne adverts? Whoevers talking speaks like they're in a position of knowledge on sensitive teeth, but they're nor. The position they get given is that of a guy from the press, or a upper level guy from the company, no one with actual value when it comes to this. Using words like 'can help prevent', or 'is proven too', people can believe that the guy knows what he's on about. And note he always says something about seeing a dentist? He might as well have held a sign saying 'Go talk to someone that can give you informed infomaton'.
Colgate have a toothpaste out now that does the same thing, and intrestingly enough, they've gone for the same documentary style format. It's horrible to watch, it's so badly done. I can't be bothered to continue on this, but if you saw it, you'd notice how everything is scripted, and badly acted out.

Friday came about, and I had high hopes, aside from those when it came to finding a main performer. Liam had agreed to play guitar in the video, Sven was okay with playing bass and we had Glenn on the drums. In convincing angelica, who agreed to be our performer, I came up with a new line, 'Do you trust me? Because I believe in you.' I'm proud of it.
Charna was a big help in getting us instruments for the video (Bass and Drums), as she knew the music teacher at Coleridge. We didn't have long with them, so it was a big rush to the drama studio to get everything set up. We went for the same feel as we had previously done with 'My Generation', a black backdrop with lights brought in for the performers to be lit up. We didn't get as many shots as I had wanted to, but with the limited time we had, we were lucky to get what we got. Later in the day, Sven went to film with max's group, and I went with angelica to film at the stage for some solo performance. Once again, we ha limited time with the guitar, so we rushed to get our shots as soon as possible. I brought down two extra lights and the wide angle lens I forgot for the band performance, and got as much as we could. It's not a lot, but I feel what we do have looks good.

Sven and I wanted to film our canvas performance on Friday, but ran out of time. It was also very windy. We took a camera and tripod out over the weekend to film on Sunday with angelica.


Sunday rained and was generally miserable.


As you can imagine, we got nothing filmed over the weekend, and so brought on Monday, where it brought sunshine and joy, but mostly sunshine.
Because of this we filmed the canvas performance. It looked fantastic. The light was bright and perfect, and we spent a long time ensuring that all the painting was filmed correctly and got as much performance as we could. Honestly, I didn't think it would go so well, and I'm thrilled that it did. At the end, we decided to use the remaining paint by spraying it all over the canvas, in which angelica got paint in her hair on the first take. From then on, she only pretended to throw it, while both Sven and I filmed close ups of it hitting the canvas by either one of us. The HD brings out all the sunlight in the paint dripping down, and I can't wait to work on the edit for that footage.

We only knew how good it looked today, Tuesday. Both Sven and I are very grateful that we were allowed to film on both the monday and tuesday on edit week, as we were so short on footage. Angelica, Sven and I went to Coleridge Rec to film the park scenes, and Tina came by to help us. We spent a long time filming it, because the video hung on this looking good. I acted in the video, and had to change clothes a few times for the role. We also did a few performance bits with angelica sitting on the grass singing, which I think look really nice. Although we ran way over, and ended up carrying loads of equipment myself as quick as I could to long road, I think it was really worth it, and I will sleep well tonight.

And I just typed all of that on my iPhone over two hours. I've been paranoid it'll crash and lose everything the whole time. If it broke now, I'd break down.

TODAY (I'll add more soon)

About to do the final shoot (aside from greenscreen filming on thursday for my ending) in a park, i've got loads of clothes for clothe changes, we've got a shotlist, all is good and ready to go

BAI